Thursday, June 11, 2015

A Haiku from Dillon C

This week we have an example of a haiku poem written by Dillon. Dillon created this in google docs and received feedback from his teacher and one of his peers using the comment tool. This feedback helped him improve his work and this is the final product. A poem full of emotion about the Christchurch Earthquake. Great work Dillon.


I am sure Dillon would love some feedback. Leave a comment...  

1 comment:

Ginny Lovrich said...

Great work Dillon. You are so right and have caught the emotion that struck us. There was such an eerie silence about the city and it is sad to lose so many historic buildings. Nice work.